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Class Magic
by Ariel Davidson

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Comment by suba suba on 11/07/19
mlpdRH This actually is definitely helpful post. With thanks for the passion to present this kind of helpful suggestions here.

Comment by suba suba on 12/21/18
6DpaxV Wow, great post.Much thanks again. Want more.

Comment by Silvia. on 10/22/10
I didn't like it.

Comment by Giggy on 03/12/09
One of the best stories I have come across. Nice variety while maintaining a good development of Mark.

Would have liked something more in the end, as the ending seemed rushed. Too much tied up too quickly regarding the conflict between Mark and the evil wizard.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 12/19/04
Good story; clever ending.  Congrats.

Comment by sandra Thomas on 11/24/00
Ariel, Thank you for taking the time and trouble to write such an entertaining and well executed work.
I always feel envious of people with your talent,and look forward with eager antisipation to reading your next story ; please dont keep your new fan waiting.!!

   love and best wishes
    Sandra (South Wales U.K )
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