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Bring Your Daughters To Work Day
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Comment by Aleesha on 05/16/10
A great and sweet touching story. Teri was very lucky to have such an understanding Mum. Thanks. Comment by rone welles on 04/09/09 I should have commented the last time I read this but this time I must .... This is a caring and lovely story .. it has potential to become a series but the author is to be commended for great writing. Comment by Genie on 07/21/01 Janis Elizabeth is truly the leader when it comes to stories of this genre. I absolutely loved reading this story. It was so easy to identify with Terry/Teri. Alas, I never shared my yearning to be a girl with my mother. Who knows, if I had Janis Elizabeth stories to read back then, maybe I would have. Comment by Paula Jutras on 05/16/01 The type of tender story that make one wish our own moms could be so sweet. Comment by Mina on 05/16/01 This my friends is the author who is single handidly keeping the American Dental Industry working,You have to respect a "sweet" author that can actualy write.....*winks* Mina Comment by emmie dee on 05/16/01 Another sweet and tender story from Janis Elizabeth, worthy of a sequel. Comment by Nora Deret on 05/16/01 I loved this story.. it was well written and flowed smoothly from begining to end.. I also think that you have room for Teri to grow and possibly become a full time young lady.. especially since Sharon's boss mentioned it and mom seems to love having her around. |
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