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Born Again
by Monica Ikon

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Comment by Ann Onymus on 02/20/07
Lovely sexy story, would love a little more details and perhaps a little more discipline. I think it would also be good if Britney was aware of what had happened.

Comment by nibor on 08/22/06
Very good the subtle way she was turned into an adult baby. I would be interested in a story how a male was forced into babyhood in a similar way. more detailed and disciplined.

Comment by juliej on 08/07/05
a bit of a bizare story but well written Its amazinf=g what women will do to get revenge

Comment by M0rr1gan on 07/27/05
Sorry to keep harping on this topic, but this story really seems to have struck a nerve.  I have encountered these sorts of forced feminization and/ or forced infantilization stories before, and I think anyone who thinks that forced infantilization is somehow "cool" or erotic or even an appropriate punishment for a person like Brian in this story should perhaps read "Still Life With Crows", by Douglas Preston and Lincoln Child (they wrote "Relic") to see just where infantilization can take you.

Read it with the lights on, if you dare.

Comment by M0rr1gan on 07/19/05
I'm ashamed that I enjoyed this story.  I found it disturbing.  The cooly calculating way in which the wife destroys her husband, and then sets about destroying his mistress sent shivers up and down my spine.  I have read a few other stories of this type, and I think the thing which bothers me the most about them is how the villain - the wife in this case - so swiftly descends from wronged spouse into somewhat deranged sexual oddball.  Sure, Brian's wife has some serious issues with him, and with his mistress Julie, but the degree of sadistic effort she puts into her revenge...whew!

Comment by Christy Tindy on 04/27/05
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. However, I think the author made one big mistake at the end. The wife should have said, "By the way, not only did I lie about Brain going crazy, I also lied about being aware. Brittany/Brian is very aware of her predicament. I gave some drugs today so she's a bit out of it, so she wouldn't respond to you, but she knows what I've done to her and you will too. You body and physical ability will fail you, and you'll know real humiliation every time you poopy your diaper, every time you drink from a bottle, every time I feed you your baby food. I will remind you and Brittany every day how you deceived me, how you were adulterers. You will look at each other and long for each other, but you will not be able to consumate you love again, only to dribble on your bibs, poop and pee in your diapers."

Other ideas were to give Julie huge breasts to make her into the slut the wife feels she is. Another idea is to pump breast milk from Julie to feed Brittany. Another is to take all of Julie's former dresses and make them into baby outfits and diaper covers..."Remember this dress you wore when dancing with Brian. Now it covers your little diapered bottom and plastic pants nicely. It's so much more useful now..."

Love,

Christy

Comment by julie j on 10/16/04
revenge is a dish best served cold they say in this story the revenge plays a huge part of it imagine the secretary whom brian had an affair with going to go the same way as brian intrsting agreat story very good twist at the end

Comment by loveslave on 11/25/01
      I especially enjoyed the last "twist of the knife" at the end, when the mistress (or should I say Juju) tries to keep the wife from regressing her by saying that someone will recognize her. The wife points out that, with some surgery, no one will know who she is. I really liked the wife's selections- breast enlargement, waist reduction, and making her lips more pouty. From the wife's point of view, these were merely the finishing touches to make Juju a complete slut. Of course, the wife probably thought she was one all along.

Comment by Trebor54 on 11/24/01
The story was good up to a point. When you get the mistress involved, that's when I think you get perverted. Having her re-marry a perverted black man is a bit much. I hope you write about the sister getting her just revenge on this pair of psycho's.

Comment by Jennifer Allison on 11/24/01
Revenge is sweet.  I love reading these stories with age regression and sex change.

Comment by Mona Roberts on 11/24/01
Wicked, utterly wicked story; I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
Although I surmised what was going to happen, I was pleasantly surprised with your additional twist.  The story kept me engrossed.



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