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Blue Screen
by Techwriter

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Comment by Original Author - Privacy required on 01/29/08
This is a plagiarized story. it has been published in print and is available elsewhere. it should be removed from this site.

Comment by Rose2 on 05/07/01
Techwriter,
    Whooo, I'm gonna watch my computer very close from now on.  A very freacky story.  I hope your future stories (and I hope there are many) are less scary but I just want more stories.
                                              Rose2

Comment by Heather Sinclair on 05/07/01
Very interesting story. Very Outer Limits. The limited memory thing seemed a little inconsistant, but ironed itself out by the end. I'm eager to see future work.

Comment by Jenny on 05/07/01
It takes quite a special kind of talent to create the sort of creepiness that abounds in this story.  If I have one criticism, it is that there are a few techie terms in here that went over my head, but then again, if I'm not actually a Luddite, I'm certainly of an age where I've only ever learned on a "need to know" basis and, despite the advancing years, the ole brain remains fertile enough for me to make the necessary leaps and guesses anyway.

Coming back to the story itself, there's a lot of effort and careful constructive thought gone into this and it develops beautifully, with questions begetting more questions than answers and answers themselves triggering still more questions.

Yes ... I liked this and I've downloaded it so that I can read it again, because I think there's probably angles in here that I'm missing from just a single read and I suspect I might like this even more upon repeat reading - which is something I rarely do with ANY story.

Keep it up, hon - you've got what it takes, at least in my opinion.



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