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The Bequest
by Paula Mortenson

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Comment by suba zupa on 08/12/18
BjapZ5 watch out for brussels. I all appreciate if you continue this in future.

Comment by Paris Parker on 04/18/15
I loved the story! It was lovely how the protagonist was made to experience the feminine side and in time he eventually started loving it. The process was dignified and respectable, though it would have been better if the characters had made a conscious choice to opt for the transformation. Nevertheless, a lovely story and I would thank the author for writing it for us!

Comment by crorkz matz on 08/05/14
2lebWb Thanks for the article.Really looking forward to read more. Fantastic.

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That's way the besstet answer so far!

Comment by Aleesha on 08/15/10
Well done. I always find it amazing hw so many authors find willing men  become obsessed by wearing women's clothes.

Comment by DEE on 09/12/07
ANOTHER FINE STORY BY A VERY CAPABLE AUTHOR.

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Comment by suna on 02/15/06
I think I figured out a bit of the ending before I should have but I do read ALOT of these stories.

Thank you for writing this one.

Comment by Diane Sutton on 10/17/01
A short story but written well. I did enjoy the way the writer moved the story and think it was well worth the time to read.



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