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Benjamin
by Samantha Michelle

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Comment by high quality backlinks on 07/19/14
kjM4GM Im thankful for the article.Really thank you! Really Great.

Comment by Jeff on 07/26/09
I'm only 5'3", but I never realized that heightism was such a severe problem in our nation until I started reading TG fiction-- then started to Google for articles on the topic. I guess I can count my blessings-- there was plenty else for the other kids to target when I was going to school. Somehow, my stature didn't get added to the list, or at least not overtly.

Comment by Bruce on 06/02/09
If all it took to get three good looking girlfriends is to wear womans clothes, there would be a lot less mens departments in stores

Comment by Molly on 05/21/08
In this story, Samantha raises the misery quotient to a new high. Her main character is a poster child for how far the members of this wretched society we live in will go in order to cram each other into neat little boxes. Anyone who doesn't fit his or her assigned box gets arms, legs, and other body parts chopped off until s/he does fit. We don't even mind when the process creates cripples, since we have plenty of boxes for them, too. If Samantha wanted to infuriate people over the gender straitjackets that we get stuffed into, she sure succeeded with me.

Comment by Cathy_t_ on 11/21/01
Samantha, I think I've said this before but, just in case, your writing ability is amazing!  Your work reminds me of Ellen Hayes at her best.  Your characters are so well fleshed out and believable that, at times, they seem almost REAL to me.  Congratulations on another fine addition to your body of very impressive work and thanks for all the hard work it must have taken to create it.
                                    Cathy_t_ said that.

Comment by Nellie D on 11/21/01
Finally, a new story and a fine it is. The characters are well developed and somewhat twisted. The descriptions are good enough to envision the scenes presented to the reader.

Welcome back Samantha.



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