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Bikini Beach: A New Experience
by Roy Del Frink

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Comment by Sam Katz on 04/08/04
Definitely not G. A beautiful expression of how useless "orfices" really are, and a good preface to Bikini beach.

I just don't have the tolerance to finish it.

My goal in accessing this site is not to be aroused but to learn how the other half lives.

It should probably be raised to M.. I don't know however how the story progresses. I will post an essay later.

I will post here when I've finished it. The essay will better explain my position for where the world needs to head.

--Sam


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