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Auctioning Rachael Anne
by Rachael Anne

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Comment by London on 10/24/12
the answer canont be determined because jack is married and George  is not.Ann is not determined if shes married or not so by that, the answer can be eithera or b because if shes married its yes if shes not its no.

Comment by Silvia. on 09/04/11
Disgusting and sickly.

Comment by "Missy," Susan Pauline Bauer on 02/20/10
Dear Ms. Rachael Anne,

I can only concur with the comments by Ms. Pickles. I, too, am put off by anyone, "owning," anyone. It should always be a mutual agreement; not one-sided.

Even though this is 2010 and well after the year you wrote this, those prices do seem very steep.

I'm, "semi-owned," by my Mistress/Wife. I am free to leave anytime I want ... with only the Housemaid's Uniform, which I wear. It was a decision, that I made. It was either being a fully submissive Housemaid/husband or the Divorce Court. She knew the our children wouldn't let live, "on the Street," but She also knew it would be a, "Susan-less," life and I wouldn't be able to live it. She knew what my response would be. Then again, She's had me, "wrapped around Her little finger," since Grammar School. Now I have three more girls, my daughter and two grand-daughters.

All our neighbors know that I'm the Housemaid/husband and compliment me on my Uniform and the nice reports that my Mistress has given about me. She's even, "loaned," or, "rented me, out," for a day when a neighbor;s washing machine broke down, their children needed an emergency sitter, or a B.D.S.M. club needed a Cocktail Maid.

Along with all the chores at home, I also work two part-time jobs. I'm the only wage-earner.

Again, your story was well written. I wanted to read your first one but it's way too long for tonight. This one was just right. While some of your readers wanted a, "Part 2," I think it ended just right. At least you didn't leave your readers with a, "The Lady or The Tiger," type of ending.

Do you also write under a different name?

Miss Susan


Comment by Danielle Richards on 09/01/06
Hi.
  Just a quick note.   I love your style and fluid motion in your stories and that's why I read them.......BUT!  Sorry, why is there always a but? I still have a hard time with Humiliation, even some torture, and now slavery of a person who's only crime is the love of women.
 I myself whould feel honered if Any male would try to emulate me. You know what is said,"Mimicry is the highest flattery".

  Nuff said. Still a well Written story as always.

                             Dani.


Comment by julie j on 10/27/04
good story but the sale price seems to be exagereted a lot who would pay that price for a pre op shemale what a way to go intresting story well written

Comment by Rachel Rae on 05/21/04
Hi Hon    Loved the story line.  I'd like to believe that a transformed slave could be worth that much but then again, a dedicated, trained and totally submissive slaves are hard to come by.  I've been auctioned off but only for an evening's worth and was always able to return to my own Mistress.  I like your version better but I'm not sure about getting myself plugged.

Luv
Rachel Rae

Comment by Donna on 12/20/02
 Wish that i were young enough to do this

Comment by Chastity Anne on 06/06/01
Dear Racheal Anne:

Loved your story and would encourage you to continue with this story line.  So many different directions you could go with a Part 2.  Living Rachael Anne's life (at least to this point) would be a fantasy come true ... as I would love nothing better than to be feminized and then placed into a situation where the unknown is much greater than the known.

Chastity Anne

Comment by Pickles on 01/13/01
Dear Rachel
In answer to your question I think the authors name was suki. She has a body of work archived on FM. She never put an Email addy with her stories. The story "Auctioning Misty" is the one you used. You will find it under the heading of "Quickies" a couple of short stories under that heading. I dont think she has published a story under that name in over a year. As you know alot of authors come on and disappear
she seems to be one. I gurdgingly like the story only because the way it turns out. I am not a big fan of the concept of slavery of any kind. I especially dont like the concept of somebody who is TG who would love to be a love slave. I know a couple of sisters who would vehemently disagree with that concept. Yes I know it is a fantasy, but it is an all to common theme in TG fiction. How about one were Rachel transitions and is swept off her feet by somebody who falls hopelessly in love with her and vice versa. Well thats my two cents.
BTW if haven't said it, I do like your work
Warmth and Love
Pickle

Comment by Paula Jutras on 01/13/01
love the story concept since I like revising old stories into my own style tale as well. Love the images added where the main character talked about no longer being able to pass as male.



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