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The Apprentice
by Paula Mortenson

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Comment by Tisha on 05/19/11
Now I know who the brainy one is, I’ll keep loiokng for your posts.

Comment by Lorin on 05/19/11
AFAIC that's the best awnesr so far!

Comment by dee on 10/05/09
very interesting and enjoyable story.

Comment by Antonia on 09/07/07
Yes this could be true.  It certainly seems possible.  I wore corsets on and off for years, and at night, and one gets used to them, especially relacing and tightening them on a regular basis.   A very nice clean story, and not impossible or full of weird sex, like many on this website.

Comment by Jnyce Dyan on 09/07/05
I adored this story. I have worn girdles for years, but always wanted to be corsetted.

Lovely story

Comment by Diane Sutton on 10/17/01
I truely enjoyed the story and the way that the transormation had taken place along with the initial corset lacing.

I could see this happen if the right person was to help with the training.

Nicely written with enough details to satisfy most readers.



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