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Andersonville 16 -- Venus Child
by Kelly Davidson

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Comment by Jezzi Stewart ... again on 12/07/04
OK - nobody's commented in over a year, mine is the last one, I just re-read this chapter, and my comment now would be exactly the same.  I think this is the chapter out of all of them that makes me the most angry - although the last one is close.  He risked his life for venus and she took away something much more precious than his sex/gender/age:  His right to pursuit of happiness and then his mental integrity.  I'll also repeat that the fact that these stories make me so angry and that despite that that I enjoy them so much that i read them over and over must mean that you, Kelly, are one hell of a good writer.

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 11/22/03
Damn it, Kelly, why do you have to be such a great writer!  Even when I read Andersonville for the 2nd or 3rd time, I still want to find some way to take the smile off the faces of those smug arrogant patronizing Olympians!  Talk about a case of "No good deed goes unpunished."  A nice guy risks his life to save one of them and without even consulting him they turn him into a little girl and Venus come's right out and admits they brainwashed him into accepting it!  I'm sure in their smug way they considered it rewarding him, but they took away his right to choose.  If they couldn't let him leave, at least why not give him a choice as to body?  Or at least this choice:  Sandra and a possible goddess or old man dead in 5 years.  Give Henry credit; I think he would have picked the former.

Comment by Does it really matter? on 01/27/03
Hey, excellent story, excelent series in fact, but personally i think you should do a follow-up on the growth of little sandra marshall

Comment by Joanne on 12/08/01
I loved it, like all of the Andersonville tales. This one was especially nice, please let us learn more of her growth.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 12/08/01
Bravo. While I'm not a big reader of stories as long as yours I do enjoy Andersonville as much as I enjoy Ovid. (don't feel I'm comparing the two like some since I look at the universes as seperate.) A wonderful job done especially on this one.

Comment by Prue on 12/08/01
Bravo Well done kelly another brilliant story. i laughed my head off at henrys antics as he tried to escape his fate. i got very emotional reading it, which in my book is the mark of a good.. no a great story. to involve the reader to that extent means that you have given the characters real identities that one can identify with. you get better with every story. huggles from your friend and fan prue



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