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Andersonville 1 - Home, Sweet Home
by Kelly Davidson

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Comment by Jill Micayla on 12/24/05
Is there a prequel to Andersonville that one should read first.I am now understanding a bit but I am sure as I read on I'll understand.  I am enjoying your serial.

Comment by candice jones on 05/20/01
This is great, i just found this and started reading. and i see theres more episodes. (rubs hands together) i love this type of story. you have a real talent, i wish i could write like this. give up your day job and getting writing more stories. best wishes from a new fan

Comment by Terry on 05/01/01
Kelly, I'm am very impressed with this story.  I've heard so much about it but couldn't get to it due to work.  I started reading it a couple of days ago and fell in love with it.  The writing is fresh and springy.  The narration is descriptive and flows very well.  The dialogue has a very good style to it.  The entire story grabs you and holds you until you finish the chapter.  Great work, Kelly.  Keep it up.  Oh, by the way, I now feel that I'm missing something if I don't go back and read 'The Life and Death of Al Parker.'  I will very soon.

Comment by Prue on 04/08/01
Well having read a few more chapters than are posted here I can say its a great story I love the similarity between this and the Professors Ovid series. great stuff Kelly, cant wait for more lol. I love the tie-in with the Al Parker story  HUGGLES FROM PRUE

Comment by Nellie D on 04/06/01
The first story of a new universe. Although the feel is the same as the Professor's Ovid, it is entirely its own format. The methods are different for the place holders and the recording of the transfomations. The writing is good with detail and description that help form the characters.



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