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All for Jasmine
by Samantha Jay

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Comment by suba suba on 11/07/19
I5ZhYq Major thankies for the article. Will read on

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Comment by suba pron on 08/12/18
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Comment by matzcrorkz on 08/03/14
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Comment by link building on 07/19/14
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Comment by cheap oem software on 02/12/12
GL5uka Yeah� I read and I understand that I do not understand anything what it is about:DD

Comment by Aleesha on 11/29/08
I have to agree with everyone else, well written and clean. We want more.

Comment by juliej on 01/04/07
this is a very sweet frendly story wel written &well worth the read more please

Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 07/19/04
Dear Samantha:


   Whaa, whaa whaa, where is the rest? I love this story and almost didn't read it as I saw nothing had been added since Dec 2001. Anyway I am glad I did read it. Are you going to finish it?

   Excellent tale with slight awkwardness at points but overwhelming character and plot strengths. It is so very nice to see true love although there are issues to resolve of course. Joking about the maids costumes was very cute. What an ideal way to learn by being taught by a motivated woman. This story defintely needs to continue. A very sweet journey here is to be enjoyed by all. This story is simply chocked full of human kindness, which I find truly a joy.

   Thanks for sharing.

   Hugs,

   Kristi

Comment by Susan Anne-Pauline on 01/12/03
Dear Samantha,

I, "loved," your two part story. It's well written and very, "tender." I'm new to this story site. There are some areas in your story that come, "alive," for me. Do you have a part three in the, "works?" I don't have too much time for the computer and I'll be reading your other stories soon.

Sincerely,

Susan

Comment by Niky on 11/13/02
love this story how dos it end please right more

Comment by Diane Sutton on 01/06/02
A well contructed tale that captures the true feelings and love of people who may not have thought of each other as having something in common other than working together.

The way that Karen comes to the aid of Jasmine when she finds out that his/her wife wants a divorce and gains the love that Karen is willing to share with her if well thought out.

Karen having hidden the fact that she has been in love with Jason/Jasmine shows that there are people willing to wait for the proper time to show the affection that is pent up inside of them.

With the help and understanding Karen has for Jasmine it's clear that this is a wonderful story and will likely continue in the future as this author knows how to relate the adventures of Jasmine in a way that allows the reader to enjoy the hardships and wonderment of Jasmines new life.

Comment by Melanie on 01/04/02
Samantha
I just loved reading your stories. I have read so many stories on this excellent site but these are so warm and soft and leave me desparate for more.
It was interesting to note your references to cricket and what I assume is soccer (what we call football) -so I assume you are from the UK.
I can't wait for part 3 -please make it soon.

Love

Melanie

Comment by Genie on 12/11/01
Samantha

Just finished reading parts one and two and I absolutely loved meeting Jason and Jasmine. Here we have a man who realizes that it is not enough to mimic a woman, with Karen's help Jason understands that he must learn to be a woman. She teaches him to embrace a woman's modes of thought as well as her behavior. The hint of a possible relationship between Jason and Karen,(or will it be Jasmine and Karen), leaves us hungry for more.

Genie

Comment by Rose2 on 12/11/01
  Ok, I cheated and waited for part 2 but that just means I got more of a great new story.  Everyone always remember when one world ends another one begins.  Jasmine seems a sassy woman "girls then" have to watch her.

Comment by Heather Sinclair on 12/07/01
Very nice first chapter. I am eager for more.

Comment by Samantha Jay on 12/01/01
Thanks to everyone who's commented. I made a few errors, which occurred when I changed Jason's age from twenty-six to twenty-two. I have amended the story and will ask Crystal to change it, soon.
I will reply to everyone who's supplied a mail address.


Thanks again to everyone

Comment by Joanna on 12/01/01
Very good.  Love the softer, Nice, stories, Please. Go on. Joanna

Comment by Alyssa Davis on 11/30/01
Excellent story...well written.  One of the better ones on the Internet.  Proof that sex and intimate details of CD'g arent necessary to convey heartfelt emotions between people dealing with stress.
Keep up the good work.  

Comment by Hector D on 11/30/01
This is a wonderful first effort.  I hope we'll see more from you.

It's a well done first-person narrative.  Jason adds things parenthetically, as they occur to him.  And he doesn't know more than he could actually be expected to about the others in his world, and what they're doing.

(If I might pick one nit...Jason is twenty-two, and got a flat 'eight or nine years ago'?  Precocious, wasn't he?  <Wink>)

PLEASE keep sharing with us.

Comment by "Princess Pervette" on 11/30/01
Nice plot.  I hope she realizes how lucky she is to be quit
of Barbara.  Eager to read more.

Pervy

Comment by Karen Anne Summerfield on 11/30/01
Way to go, Samantha! Jolly good show ole' gel!

I told you that you could do it!

HUGGLES!
Karen

Comment by andrina on 11/30/01
sam,
what a lovely story, i was captivated reading it thinking of all the ways that karen will help jasmine discover herself? he has so much to learn about being a woman....will karen move in, will they be lovers, will jasmine become her "bride"..looking forward to the next installment
love
andrina



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