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Adventures on the USS Hornblower
by: Maggie Finson & Bad Irving

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Comment by Silvia. on 10/26/10
Good story.
Silvia.

Comment by Jayne Seymore on 04/06/10
I laughed so much I couldn't read on for the tears!

Please, please, please let us have some more adventures of Robin the girl wonder!


Comment by Stanley Morton on 07/29/07
Love the humor and the way that Frank and the captain recieved their just desserts.  will you continue the series?

Comment by Knightshifter on 02/07/03
I looooooooved this story. *laughs* It's hallaroius and just a great laugh.

Other than the exsessive cussing, the story is perfect. There is one other thing I didn't like but I can't remember it offhand but it doesn't really matter anyways, it was small.

Honestly, if this happende to me, I'd loooooooove being a woman. But, like Robin, I'd so wanna kill Frank. *Laughs*

Frank deserved what he got in the end, as did the Captain. Great story. Maybe you can do another hallaroius one where Robin gets pregnant, and hates it. *Chuckles*

See ya, and thanks for great read. :)

Comment by Bluto on 02/07/02
Not sure who contributed what,but I am a big Bad Irvin fan and was happy to see this new story. I really liked Feng the lizard thing. Your discriptions of him/her/it were disturbing, but also amusing. As with all Bad Irvin stories there was a BE theme, which I enjoyed. This story would fit in well with Keven Sorbo's syndicated "Andromeda" series (Feng could be Rev, the Magaog; Harper would be Frank the engineer; Teer the Neitchian could be Robin - he already has a perfect body, it would just be female now.) Will someone please send this story to Sorbo for his consideration?

Comment by Merodda on 12/12/01
Nice and nasty. I loved it. One of the most amusing reads I've had in a long time.

It'll be interesting to see how, or if, you will write a follow-up to this.

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 10/11/01
Great story and a good laugh.  I would like to see further adventures of Rob ... or will it still be Robin???  :-)  

Comment by Sally  Ann  Francis on 10/10/01
You two are great I loved this story. For once I could laugh and enjoy a story. The humor was perfect, as was the plot. Thankyou,  Sally



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