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Acting Up
by Gingerfred Man

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Comment by elaine on 05/25/14
loved this story wish i had an aunt who would teach me to dress and fuck

Comment by vicki on 05/16/04
this is avery sexy vstory

Comment by Broni Marsh on 08/25/02
Hey G, you've done another great job here. I loved your setting it up as a play. What a wonderful aunt! I'm enjoying seeing your development as an author as I read through your stories.

Comment by Sissy Priscilla Valentine on 08/13/01
I am sooooo jealous of them!  I'd soooooo love an Aunt or Mommy like Laurie!  Love your style!

Kisses! ;-)


Comment by Sally Ann Francis on 07/15/01
I have read your stories and found them both stimulating {read eroctic} and loving. I'm sentamental and love a good love story.       Still, please don't end this tale here. I'm sure you knew that we would want to read the rest of the story. Then could you write one where your young {girl girls} find life partners and true love:heart,body, mind and soul?   Love your work, Sally.

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