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Accidental Life
by Rachel Ann Cooper

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Comment by Silvia. on 09/05/11
Now you did a great job.
This story is really wonderful. You know how to write good stories when you want to do it!
Comment by Ally on 10/29/09
Short, Sweet, and to the point. As so many others have said, I do hope that this one is continued.
Love Ally!!!
Comment by stephen on 11/22/08
this is great story for part one. cant wait for part two.
Comment by Jolene on 07/17/08
This has the potential for being an outstanding story or even a BOOK!  Please finish it sooon.    Jolene
Comment by CATHY ANGELA DAVIS on 07/13/08
PLEASE MAKE IT KIND AND TENDER WHEN YOU FINISH IT.
Comment by Daniel on 05/26/07
Good start, but needs to be continued.
Comment by Jane Hudson on 12/30/03
Just read this wonderful story loved it I work and live full time as Jane but my work is running Treatment plant I think I would like to do the office bit full time not just a couple of hours filling treatment process forms. This life Connie has sound lot of  fun Ah well real world my dear. Keep up the great work
Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 03/20/03
It's a shame that this story has been up for 3 years and no one has commented on it.  Is that why it was never continued?  I like part 1.  Aunt Jen is so sure the conditioning will take care of everything*, and the story certainly could go in the happy happy joy joy direction of detailed descriptions of wonderful salon visits and shopping trips and dates with dreamy boys, etc.  But there is also the potential for a much more conflicted Julie as a not-so-conditioned-as-they-thought Jason begins to fight the conditioning.  Exactly how much have they messed with HIS mind?  An enquiring Jason wants to know.

* BTW, why does Aunt Jen feel she has to teach Julie makeup?  Why wasn't it included in the conditioning like hair was?  Did Jen leave it out so she'd have something to do?


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