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The Academy
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Comment by anahera on 06/03/14
Great ending, well written a very determined focus young man that became Comment by james on 05/13/13 Good story. Tender and showing that opinions of others are not as we often expect. Comment by april on 01/16/12 lovely gentle story Comment by Silvia. on 05/31/10 Hi Alyssa. Comment by john on 06/09/08 again I am evious of his situation. Comment by Vivien on 06/07/05 The Academy- Your stories are just too cool! It's easy to imagine ones self being in such situations such as Cris's! Keep up the good work! Comment by Ronda on 06/05/05 Great story and great ending...I look forward to the sequel. Maybe a new begining. Comment by julie j on 02/24/05 this was a great story it was intresting how terri helped him &how he was accepted well done Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 12/06/02 I really liked this story. It was for the most part a sweet story of discovery and romance with a setting that showed both were dedicated to helping others. But why couldn't they have been equals? There was no need for the sex slave/submissive stuff, and it certainly detracted from the story for me. I know you made it clear that the trelationship was by mutual consent, but that term "sex SLAVE" just grates on me. Comment by Barbara Lynn on 11/12/02 Alyssa,as always, you do not leave the reader wanting. I loved this story. I told another author that would read anything she wrote. Likewise Alyssa, I will read anything you write. You are a very good writer. Comment by hm on 07/11/02 good story Comment by AV on 05/21/02 I liked the story! Comment by A.V. on 05/21/02 I did like the story. Some parts of the story could have been more described. Comment by dj on 04/10/01 nice story Comment by Francesca on 01/15/01 Yes I loved this one too. I commented yesterday but forgot to press the button.Keep them coming Alyssa. |
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