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Abbi's Punishment
by Serena Lawhead

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Comment by Silvia. on 06/19/12
Very bad story. Disgusting.

Comment by J on 11/30/11
Great storie it is a good thing that those hyptnotic drugs and fast hormones are not availible or there would be a lot more sissies running around.  Too bad.     Keep writing more great stories J.

Comment by Vicki Stewart on 12/22/08
Nice story Serena, and bravo to Suzie,  I've met quite a few people like Jack over the years, and would love to get my own back on them!    What was the name of that hypnotic drug?   Vicki. xx

Comment by Mistress Meredith on 11/11/08
Bravo, Mistress Suzi. You are a perfect dominatrix who knows how to handle very derserving men by turning them into the very thing they hate the most -- flaming sissies in skirts and heels. I can only hope Mistress Analeise is as strict with abigail as you were. Of course, the more they know of their former lives, the more humiliating their forced feminization and servitude will be for edele and abigail. Rock on ladues, rock on!

Comment by Priscilla Ann on 02/12/08
My goodness; both Edele (Eddy) and Abigail (Jack) certainly got what was coming to them. And Misress Suzi did a real number on Abigail, though. It would now be great to know what horrors Mistress Analeise decides to have Abigail endure -- payback is a bitch, as they say -- isn't it?

Comment by John on 05/29/07
I hope there is going to be a Part 2 and maybe more.  thank you.

Comment by Gale Shefly on 06/18/05
A very nice story

Comment by julie on 03/07/03
an intresting story it is a good way of getting revenge I would like to have had jack into bondage and told why this was haping a spell in a locked cage would also be good overall a good story well done more please



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